WIP - Pseudo-Spider

Recently purchased a Marvel Select "Amazing Spider-Man" figure, and was quite impressed with how Spidey's new costume looks. (I've been a long-running fan of Spider-Man since the first live-action film came out in the early 2000s.) Anyhow, I thought it'd be an interesting challenge to try and draw Spider Man, but after studying all those LINES of webbing... yeah, not happening. SO, I decided to try my hand at designing my own "Pseudo-Spider" style of costume, and perhaps a character to go along with it. Here's what I have so far. Drawn with pencil, inked, and colored using Sharpies of all things.

EDIT: Webbing added, drawing finished. (And yes, I'm aware the image is fuzzy. My scanner is inoperative right now.) What do y'all think?

Comments welcome and appreciated.

Spider-Man is (c) Marvel Comics.